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Post by ammonjerro on May 9, 2009 9:08:38 GMT -6
Name: Sigmul O'Connell Age: 25 Gender: Male Affiliation: Xana Appearence: 
History: Sigmul was with the Elder Dwmeres when they banished the Overseers form the land. As a young lad Sigmul lived with his younger sister in the small settlement of Raldon looking after the crops and his sister, since their parents died in the raid that destroyed Raldon. Later on a large group of Grey Dwarfs attacked the settlement, and Sigmul was forced to lend aid to his home, and defend Lily. Using his arcane powers to ward the villagers, and to transport them to safely. After the attack of Raldon, Sigmul gave his sister a piece of silver that seemed to have magical properties. Sigmul feared that the attackers were looking for this, and sent Lily off to Dargon, the Capitol of Nosgoth. After Lily had left for Dargon, Sigmul, left for the Citadel of Apothos in Calur to make sense of the attack. Other info: Lyoko Appearence: 
Lyoko Weapons: Rapier
Scimitar Lyoko Powers: Long Fall into Darkness Doomsayer
You point a finger at your foe, and a gaping pit opens beneath
him. The pit is merely a figment of his imagination, but he plunges into the darkness nonetheless until, at last, he hits the bottom.
Soul Scorch Life-Stealer
As black fire immolates your adversary, you release one of your life sparks. Your foe cries out in pain as he feels the life ebb from his body.
Soultheft Life-Stealer
You engulf your enemies in crackling purple energy. As they crumple, blazing motes of soul-light rise up from their bodies and fly into your grasp. Lyoko Vehicle: Teleportation
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Post by Mugen K. I. Kagemaru on May 9, 2009 15:04:58 GMT -6
You should go in-depth now, but if it's time constraints that are preventing you, then that's fine.
Despite that, it looks good from what you decided to fill in. I can't accept this, as I'm not an Admin, but I would if I was.
Disregard that.
Thanks for the heads-up, Ash. Didn't know it was him.
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Post by The Dude on May 9, 2009 18:32:54 GMT -6
Denied
No mechs and were still sore about the whole threating to hack the site thing kain.
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Post by Miyako "Thunder" Sirren on May 9, 2009 19:23:42 GMT -6
And just when I thought I’d seen it all... Just a quick list of errors.... -History- too lazy. Okay. Well how many people do I know that are too lazy to have a past, none? Maybe because it’s physically impossible. Your character sheet should be ready and complete when posted, or put WIP(work in progress) or similar in the title. But personally, I'd never post something half done. Especially CS. -Other Info- Don’t piss her off.... Well, I fail to see how that has any information in it, or as to why it’s relevant. Maybe I'm missing it. -Lyoko appearance- ... That isn’t even a real sentence. And it confuses me as to what you were trying to say, but if you meant never seen out of her Lyoko form, you could have said it better. But I’m sure if she was off Lyoko she would not look like a machine. Think it through. -Weapons- Not very creative... But I’ve seen that issue a thousand times before. I'll let that one slide. -Lyoko Vehicle- oh wow, mech. You realize the vehicles have no weapons, and it’s Armour would be as thick as a wet paper bag? Yeah? Good, go ahead then! Now for the point that winds me up... Before I create a character on a site, I check to see if any active member has similar abilities, I read their posts and take a peak round. And so did you. I apologize if I’m jumping on you but Kristopher Kusack has used his pyrokenetics in the exact ways listed. The only difference being the last one was slightly modified. And the names were tagged on the start. If you copycat powers, at least modify it a little more than that. The other staff’s issues are in no way affecting my judgement, but unless this gets up to Liam’s, Xavier’s or even better to the lovely quality of Haxx I would decline this character application. Spend some time with it, get to know your character as if they were your closest friend. Rather than a half hearted character sheet pushed out through boredom. Drag up the quality or I can't see you roleplaying any time soon. Sorry for the outburst. Love you guys :3 ~Thunder |
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Post by ammonjerro on May 10, 2009 21:32:09 GMT -6
Have you ever hear of something called a tank, Apache longbow 64-D, F-18A super hornet, and many other vehicles that I can't remember off the top of my head. No to the mech thing. I never knew that the "metal" used to create the mech is such a piece of crap, that they use them in so many battles.
You are an idiot.
If I ever see you I will murder you.
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Post by Mugen K. I. Kagemaru on May 10, 2009 22:16:56 GMT -6
Mechs aren't allowed, period. Furthermore, you need to explain how he came into Xana's service. Given the history he currently has, he could just as easily be a Lyoko Warrior. You are an idiot. If I ever see you I will murder you. That doesn't help your case. I'm surprised Titan didn't ban you for your previous crap when he found out you were back. It merited a permanent ban. |
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Post by ammonjerro on May 11, 2009 11:05:08 GMT -6
1. I apologize for the comment, but really it's just idiotic to say that vehicles can't have weapons. Plus I do not accept that your ignorant it's just restarted.
Secondly Titan cannot ban me on past occurrences since the site has changed since I lat been here.
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Haxx
New warrior
Xana's new advantage.
Posts: 37
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Post by Haxx on May 11, 2009 13:38:41 GMT -6
Been back a day and already starting a heated discussion. This bodes well...
Sarcasm aside, I see by Thunder's comment and your editing time you've reworked various parts. But, as we have turned this application into a discussion I do not feel the harm in giving my own points.
You have a history now, which is a start. However, I think you might be working on the assumption no one here has played Neverwinter Nights 2. Let me guess, your plot for their sister to take this shard and magically forge it into a sword? That is without asking how exactly any of that relates to Lyoko, you forgot to explain that.
It is an improvement though, and any character’s worth is proven when they actually interact with the others. Providing the administration actually accepts it, and your past stays as buried as you seem to think it is.
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Post by ammonjerro on May 11, 2009 14:10:34 GMT -6
I accept all opinions either negative or positive. Well you see, I mainly play D&D 4th edition. Yes I have played NWN2, everything in my bio is not from the storyline of NWN2,(I am extremely uncreative with history of characters.) I have taken the basic plot line. I won't go into the details of my site, if you want please PM me.
Now onto the second matter at hand. Since I have never seen the show, what I do know is that it takes place in the modern time, and a vertural world, and since it's a vertural world pretty much anything could happen. (Hackers.) I'll change my background story later since I have something to do now.
Just to clarify the definition of Hacker is someone that modifies computers, such as engineering them. (putting them together.) Which is what I do. Or someone that can program, much like programing a basic VBA game. Now the definition of hacker goes beyond computers. I'm not going to rant on any further if you want me to continue to discuss the definition of hackers, please PM me.
Now for me personally. I admit that I can become extremely angry with the most simple things, hence the reason I go to anger management courses, and some other personal reasons that I'm not going to say. Just a heads up for anyone new here, and for clarifications of people that I associated with on this site in the past. I apologize.
Getting off topic here for a moment, their was one individual, not naming names, that forbids the discussion of religion here. I'm sketchy on the details, but this individual declined my friend from expressing his religion here on the site, which is a direct violation of the T/S of pro-boards. Enough said lets move on.
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Post by voradorkarachi on May 11, 2009 15:04:29 GMT -6
I accept all opinions either negative or positive. Well you see, I mainly play D&D 4th edition. Yes I have played NWN2, everything in my bio is not from the storyline of NWN2,(I am extremely uncreative with history of characters.) I have taken the basic plot line. I won't go into the details of my site, if you want please PM me. Now onto the second matter at hand. Since I have never seen the show, what I do know is that it takes place in the modern time, and a vertural world, and since it's a vertural world pretty much anything could happen. (Hackers.) I'll change my background story later since I have something to do now. Just to clarify the definition of Hacker is someone that modifies computers, such as engineering them. (putting them together.) Which is what I do. Or someone that can program, much like programing a basic VBA game. Now the definition of hacker goes beyond computers. I'm not going to rant on any further if you want me to continue to discuss the definition of hackers, please PM me. Now for me personally. I admit that I can become extremely angry with the most simple things, hence the reason I go to anger management courses, and some other personal reasons that I'm not going to say. Just a heads up for anyone new here, and for clarifications of people that I associated with on this site in the past. I apologize. Getting off topic here for a moment, their was one individual, not naming names, that forbids the discussion of religion here. I'm sketchy on the details, but this individual declined my friend from expressing his religion here on the site, which is a direct violation of the T/S of pro-boards. Enough said lets move on. NERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRD |
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Post by The Dude on May 11, 2009 17:56:58 GMT -6
sadly i agree with Vora
And now you have to wait longer before you can rp. Btw this our site not probards and we make the rules for this site not them. Its our site.
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Post by The Dude on May 11, 2009 18:29:14 GMT -6
Shadow put up the ban hammer picture here dude and lokc the thread.
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Post by voradorkarachi on May 11, 2009 18:48:09 GMT -6
I don't want to start an argument, but, Ash you are wrong. Since you are using a proboards product, they have the finally say on what to do on a federal level.
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Post by Titan on May 11, 2009 19:07:33 GMT -6
What vora said is true. All of our american rights only apply in america, not on cyberspace. Since proboards is a private service(meaning it is not federally owned) they can do whatever they want. If they want to delete any boards that have the letter T in the site name they cant and nobody can do anything about it.
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Post by voradorkarachi on May 11, 2009 19:14:27 GMT -6
I really want to kick this characters ass.
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Post by Mugen K. I. Kagemaru on May 11, 2009 19:44:15 GMT -6
Shadow put up the ban hammer picture here dude and lokc the thread. Uhh... bro? Did you forget? I got demoted. |
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Post by Miyako "Thunder" Sirren on May 12, 2009 1:45:52 GMT -6
Okay, coming back and looking at this it's all just been blown way out of proportion. Possibly my comment was a little to sarcastic and pretty badly worded. But this is how I see the standings currently.
The character sheet itself is okay if you take out the fact the history is almost a direct copy of "Never Winter Knights II" And the powers are a little debatable, if I was an Admin I would ask for them to be toned down or changed along with a History rewrite.
Now guys, there are a lot of immature comments flying about this character sheet, and there is no need for it. Constructive criticism is all nice but past deeds are done, it really depends on the staff decisions to see what is done about them.
On another note the Proboards.com Terms of service are bound by international and state law, (meaning US laws) But through experience I can say they are lesser known at best. Proboards, like any other company, are bound by laws and hold everything they host as part of their ground. So they can remove/change anything they wish within reason. They are the hosts, after all, so they get the final say though 90% of the site it down to the users (meaning site Admins.)
However your friend was should not have been declined on religion alone. If that was indeed the case and I'm sure one of Admin can help me out on this point, there were probably other and/or justified reasons for it. And if not I'm sure if your friend was to return they would receive an apology from the staff if the situation deserved it.
If one of the Admin would be so kind, or Shadow (Sorry about that Shadow.) I would like the situation with what happened previously explained in as much detail as possible sent to me via PM if that is at all possible? Thanks much.
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Post by Mugen K. I. Kagemaru on May 12, 2009 15:19:49 GMT -6
The official issue with the original sheet was that he had a mech for a vehicle, and that he had decided not to completely fill out the sheet. Laziness, IMO, is no excuse to not add a history. That, and he decided not to go in-depth about something, IDR what.
Also, Thunder, my Staff position is limited to providing advice on characters, and that's about it.
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Post by Titan on May 12, 2009 15:28:11 GMT -6
wait who got denied for religion?
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Post by Mugen K. I. Kagemaru on May 12, 2009 16:40:01 GMT -6
No idea. I don't recall religion ever being an issue outside of public discussion, and that's just to keep fights and drama from occurring. However your friend was should not have been declined on religion alone. If that was indeed the case and I'm sure one of Admin can help me out on this point, there were probably other and/or justified reasons for it. And if not I'm sure if your friend was to return they would receive an apology from the staff if the situation deserved it. Wait, whose character was rejected b/c of religion? |
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